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Post by bobsnicket on Apr 15, 2008 17:21:03 GMT -5
Well, it's just a tad repetitive when the entire purpose of the first half of the story is people grouping together, looking for others to join their group, looking for other groups, then splitting into two more groups, each group going to find another group, then a larger group going to find the smaller groups, then splitting into three more groups, then one group getting captured and the other two groups going back to find that group, and a new group sets out to find any of the other groups, and a group meets another group, mixes up, then splits again into totally different groups, and... See what I mean?  |
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Post by Big Boss on Apr 15, 2008 17:23:57 GMT -5
well i just voted for the last person..soo that shuld do it
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Post by ready2brawl on Apr 16, 2008 17:05:19 GMT -5
LOL I knew it! As I have previously stated, you, sir, are one crafty author.
Nana+Popo=2/7 of the 7
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Post by smashbro on Apr 20, 2008 16:19:38 GMT -5
yeah...i got to write the next chapter. also, all members of the 7 may not meet initially. so who do you think is with who?
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Post by Dwayne Wadepoop321 on Apr 21, 2008 13:05:35 GMT -5
I don't know, but i might thnk about that some more
maybe
popo and Luigi or Nana and Luigi if luigi is in the 7
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Post by smashbro on Apr 21, 2008 13:34:09 GMT -5
ill probably start writing the next chapter now. the chapter will revisit 3 or 4 people who were already seen since the split
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Post by Dwayne Wadepoop321 on Apr 21, 2008 16:53:10 GMT -5
chpt 44 or 45
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Post by smashbro on Apr 28, 2008 14:08:37 GMT -5
chapter 44. lets see. 1-5 charcters will get captured, at least 1 will escape the army, but will still be featured in another chapter about the 7, and 1 will become part of the 7.
IMPORTANT!~ish
only 1 more chapter left to reveal the last of the 7. also, I have planned it out and the story will be...61 chapters long...maybe with a short epilogue
ok...i updated the last of the 7, and am writing the next chapter now...any comments?
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Post by bobsnicket on Apr 28, 2008 16:58:38 GMT -5
Wolf? Didn't really think of him as physically weak  ...oh well, nice surprise... |
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Post by ready2brawl on Apr 28, 2008 17:03:52 GMT -5
Hmmmm.... odd choice.
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Post by smashbro on Apr 28, 2008 17:04:47 GMT -5
they didnt have to be physically weak...they could be emotionally weak, like Lucas.
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Post by bobsnicket on Apr 28, 2008 17:12:33 GMT -5
Wolf is overly prideful...I suppose that could count as emotional weakness.
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Post by smashbro on May 2, 2008 17:57:45 GMT -5
thinking back, it may not be the best choice...but if you look back at the prophecy, you might find out that his selfish-ness (not caring about everyone else) could be problematic
added another chapter which might clear some things up
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Post by Dwayne Wadepoop321 on May 2, 2008 21:39:48 GMT -5
Ok, so this story will end at chpt 61, and i read all your chpters and caught up wit the story
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Post by smashbro on May 17, 2008 8:51:09 GMT -5
ok...im up to chapter 50, gonna work on writing a few more this week. hopefully i'll have it all written soon, and all thats left will be to post it.
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...oh well, nice surprise...
