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Post by smashbro on Apr 8, 2008 17:30:18 GMT -5
sorry, but he has nothing bad about him, he was an overall good person. unfortuanately, those kind of people get capttured right now...
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Post by Dwayne Wadepoop321 on Apr 8, 2008 18:35:10 GMT -5
OT: Why does the vote say, 3 votes, and 2 people voted
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Post by smashbro on Apr 8, 2008 18:36:58 GMT -5
it must have allowed deauvux 2 votes...i dont know why. but i can make another poll, in another section about the rest of the 7
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Post by Dwayne Wadepoop321 on Apr 8, 2008 19:37:05 GMT -5
you did, ok
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Post by smashbro on Apr 9, 2008 15:06:55 GMT -5
ill add one more chapter at the end of the week, but i night not post more for some time
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Post by Dwayne Wadepoop321 on Apr 9, 2008 16:51:25 GMT -5
ok
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Post by ready2brawl on Apr 9, 2008 17:14:58 GMT -5
it must have allowed deauvux 2 votes...i dont know why. but i can make another poll, in another section about the rest of the 7 Not I. Called Jiggs. And who's Deauvux? LOL. I dont want to seem like a pain, but its Devaux. Say: Dev-O. |
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Post by Dwayne Wadepoop321 on Apr 9, 2008 17:16:37 GMT -5
I wonder who is he? lol
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Post by smashbro on Apr 9, 2008 21:05:49 GMT -5
no...it just said only me and you were the voters...its wierd
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Post by ready2brawl on Apr 10, 2008 11:51:53 GMT -5
Even now it doesnt say that poop voted.
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Post by Dwayne Wadepoop321 on Apr 10, 2008 15:44:41 GMT -5
Because i didn't
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Post by smashbro on Apr 11, 2008 13:33:12 GMT -5
adde the next chapter, youll be surprised
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Post by Dwayne Wadepoop321 on Apr 11, 2008 15:46:19 GMT -5
They both got seperated, and i bet Luigi, is going to be in the 7
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Post by bobsnicket on Apr 14, 2008 23:36:56 GMT -5
*Whew!*  I've just read through your whole story in a few days...very interesting! Two things I would suggest are first, describe the setting more; sometimes it's not very clear what kind of environment they're in; and two: you're past this now, but early on there was a lot of group gathering stuff that became slightly boring after a while...but otherwise great job! And is it possible for someone who is already captured to become good and then be part of the 7? If so, I want Yoshi in; his power is often undermined, and he has a kind heart and does not, at least I think, have the heart of a warrior, but a peacemaker...ok, I'm done now... |
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Post by smashbro on Apr 15, 2008 7:17:15 GMT -5
*Whew!* I've just read through your whole story in a few days...very interesting! Two things I would suggest are first, describe the setting more; sometimes it's not very clear what kind of environment they're in; and two: you're past this now, but early on there was a lot of group gathering stuff that became slightly boring after a while...but otherwise great job! And is it possible for someone who is already captured to become good and then be part of the 7? If so, I want Yoshi in; his power is often undermined, and he has a kind heart and does not, at least I think, have the heart of a warrior, but a peacemaker...ok, I'm done now... Thanks for the advice...i'll work on adding more of the setting, and as for the group gathering, i agree it could get boring but its kinda necessary. what would make it more interesting for you? even though i might not be able to use it this story id like to know. and yeah, its possible for someone who is already captured to be part of the 7, but yoshi would be one of the most good people in the story, so he probably doesnt have much of a chance of getting in. i have everything already planned out, but you never know, there can always be time to write more about a character later |
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I've just read through your whole story in a few days...very interesting! Two things I would suggest are first, describe the setting more; sometimes it's not very clear what kind of environment they're in; and two: you're past this now, but early on there was a lot of group gathering stuff that became slightly boring after a while...but otherwise great job! 
