Post by bobsnicket on Oct 31, 2007 19:44:44 GMT -5
[glow=green,2,300]Book 1: The Journey[/glow]
Chapter 1: Familiar Days
Thump! Thump! Thump! Mario dodged Bowser as Bowser stomped toward him, nostrils steaming. Mario kept running around him until Bowser was facing the other direction. He grabbed Bowser’s tail and started swinging it around. Faster, faster, until Bowser was only a blur. Mario let go and sent Bowser soaring towards a spiked bomb. Bullseye! The bomb exploded, and roaring, Bowser spun in the air and landed on the floating platform. Bowser groaned, disappeared, and gave up the key with Mario holding up two fingers and shouting the usual, “Let’s-a-go!” Mario was just about to go eat Princess Peach’s cake when he heard footsteps behind him. Before he could turn around or even adjust his red cap with the classic M on it, he was knocked out.
Link and Zelda were giving Falco and Marth a tour of Hyrule Castle. Falco and Marth looked around in awe as they explored the Temple of Time, the grand hallway, and the courtyard. Everyone saw the broken window with shards of glass scattered on the floor of the grand hallway. But before Link or Marth could draw their swords or Falco take out his laser gun, there was a sharp thunk on each person’s head, and they lost consciousness.
The Poke-Floats in the skies of Saffron City were seen everywhere. Pikachu, Ness, the Ice Climbers, and Princess Peach were admiring the inflated Pokemon floating in the air. Suddenly, people in the crowd were moving aside for a group of dashing figures rushing towards them. By the time the Ice Climbers reached for their hammers, or Peach for her frying pan and Ness for his yo-yo, the shapes were upon them. The only one who managed to merge into the crowd and blend in (somewhat) was Popo. Everyone else felt a painful bonk on their heads, but right before their consciousness left them, Peach got a glance of one of the figures. Her vision was too blurry to recognize details, but she thought it looked somewhat metallic…
Everyone woke up from their whacks in small, cramped, and dusty cells. Each room had a stone bench and an uninviting barred window.
Ness stared glumly at the stone wall in front of him. What had happened to their luxurious vacation in Saffron, and what about the pretty princess and the others who had been with them? Where were they, why were they here, and who had planned this dastardly plot? Questions streamed through Ness’s psychic mind. He decided to go see what was outside. When he saw what was there, his mouth gaped open in surprise, his eyes wide.
Ness had expected to see some kind of barren wasteland, or at least a forbidden plain or something. But all he saw was a giant room. There was a desk the height of a skyscraper with a humungous reading lamp and a gigantic bed to his left and in front of him loomed a towering white door with a golden handle. To his right were a theatre-sized TV and some familiar Nintendo game systems on shelves. He looked down, and saw that whatever structure he was in stood on a giant table, cluttered with regular-sized plastic trees and model houses.
“How am I going to get out of here?” Ness wondered out loud. “What will I do even if I get out, and what will happen to me if I don’t?”
“Who’s that?” a quivering voice asked from the other side of the wall in a strong Italian accent. “It’s-a-me, Mario.”
“Wow!” Ness exclaimed. “THE Mario? So you’re stuck here too, huh? What’s going on here?”
“No idea,” Mario replied, “But I-a-know where we are. We’re in the Master Hand’s room.”
TO BE CONTINUED...
Character Locations
Master Hand's Fortress: Mario, Link, Zelda, Falco, Marth, Pikachu, Ness, Nana, Princess Peach
??: Bowser, PopoAlso PLEASE GIVE FEEDBACK! ;D
(Yeah, the first chapter kind of sucks, but that's because I wrote that part a LONG time ago[I'm talking 6th grade], but it gets better, trust me!
)11/6: Increased paragraph spacing to make for easier reading.
11/10:Added Chapter Pic.
Yeah, I wasn't sure (way back then) what to do with the spacing because even though on Word each paragraph is indented, for some reason it's not when I copy it to here...and the small spacings are for normal paragraphs while the larger spaces are for setting changes...maybe that's a bit hard to notice... 
