Post by Dobs on Aug 17, 2009 1:00:43 GMT -5
Alright guys, I've been thinking about writing an Metroid Fanfic for a while, and Angel and Devaux talked me into posting a preview here for you guys. This is the beginning of the first chapter, so just let me know if you like it and if i should bother continuing.
WARNING! Explicit Content. NSFW.
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Samus woke up in a cold sweat, screaming from the gruesome nightmare she had just witnessed. The sweat glistened in the moonlight on her bare skin; she lowered the zipper on her Zerosuit a bit so that she could breathe in the heat. She rubbed her hand across her brow and stood to gaze out the window of her Gunship.
Suddenly, the ground beneath her began to shake. She ran to grab her emergency pistol when the hull of the ship was torn in two. She fell from the cockpit and landed hard on all fours on the rocky terrain below. She looked up into the eyes of none other than the Space Pirate Commander, Ridley.
"You've been a very bad boy, Ridley," said Samus as she cracked her whip, "I'm going to have to teach you a lesson."
Ridley let out a menacing screeched and grabbed the bounty hunter by her pony tail and pulled her down towards his pelvis. He used his massive claws to rip open the bottom of her zerosuit to reveal the heroine's full behind. He quickly revealed his massive scaley 13 inch cock and thrust it into Samus' eager asshole. She moaned loudly, nearly drowned out by the thunder of the approaching storm. Rain set down upon the two of them as they made love in one of the many craters of Crateria.
"Harder!" shouted the rain drenched bounty hunter as she further unzipped her zerosuit to reveal her sopping wet breasts. "Harder, dammit!" She let her whip out and firmly struck the dragon's left buttock.
But the dragon could not thrust any harder, he was tiring, panting from behind Samus. Suddenly, the earth began to shake once more... this time in a steady rhythm. Slowly, Kraid's figure emerged from over the horizon.
"Perfect," said Samus, voice full of lust, "Come here, you."
Kraid unraveled his twelve foot cock and obligingly forced it between Samu's legs as walked to the front and put his own, somewhat less impressive cock into her mouth. They continued in this position for several hours, until the earth began to shake again...
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That's all i've got down for now, what do you guys think?
WARNING! Explicit Content. NSFW.
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Samus woke up in a cold sweat, screaming from the gruesome nightmare she had just witnessed. The sweat glistened in the moonlight on her bare skin; she lowered the zipper on her Zerosuit a bit so that she could breathe in the heat. She rubbed her hand across her brow and stood to gaze out the window of her Gunship.
Suddenly, the ground beneath her began to shake. She ran to grab her emergency pistol when the hull of the ship was torn in two. She fell from the cockpit and landed hard on all fours on the rocky terrain below. She looked up into the eyes of none other than the Space Pirate Commander, Ridley.
"You've been a very bad boy, Ridley," said Samus as she cracked her whip, "I'm going to have to teach you a lesson."
Ridley let out a menacing screeched and grabbed the bounty hunter by her pony tail and pulled her down towards his pelvis. He used his massive claws to rip open the bottom of her zerosuit to reveal the heroine's full behind. He quickly revealed his massive scaley 13 inch cock and thrust it into Samus' eager asshole. She moaned loudly, nearly drowned out by the thunder of the approaching storm. Rain set down upon the two of them as they made love in one of the many craters of Crateria.
"Harder!" shouted the rain drenched bounty hunter as she further unzipped her zerosuit to reveal her sopping wet breasts. "Harder, dammit!" She let her whip out and firmly struck the dragon's left buttock.
But the dragon could not thrust any harder, he was tiring, panting from behind Samus. Suddenly, the earth began to shake once more... this time in a steady rhythm. Slowly, Kraid's figure emerged from over the horizon.
"Perfect," said Samus, voice full of lust, "Come here, you."
Kraid unraveled his twelve foot cock and obligingly forced it between Samu's legs as walked to the front and put his own, somewhat less impressive cock into her mouth. They continued in this position for several hours, until the earth began to shake again...
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That's all i've got down for now, what do you guys think?
