Naruto: 6th hokage

[naruto1985]

Chapter 1: A hidden sand village mission.

It was a calm warm day as Naruto is at the hidden sand village training field with Temari as Naruto looked at Temari while Naruto gets into sage mode knowing the jutsu Temari has is even stronger than ever.

After Naruto powered up to sage mode Naruto said "OK Temari lets train and don't go easy because I wanna teach you something called wind shield jutsu" then Temari strikes with Wind sythe jutsu until Naruto held his hand up as Naruto yelled "Wind style wind shield jutsu" which Naruto blows a big wind to block wind sythe jutsu.

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[The Solid War Doctor]

I'll be honest with you, its REALLY short. I would like it to be a bit longer so I could give you a better opinion, but you do what you want.

If you'd like you can read my first two chapters of my Novel Im writing.
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This is about how long I would like you to write so I can give you my opinion.

[Zeke Sturm]

I have a suggestion: Keep up with your Canon.

SPOILER ALERT FOR THOSE WHO DON'T READ JAPANESE MANGA SCANLATIONS:

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Danzo is the 6th Hokage. He's DEAD, but he's the 6th. Naruto would be the 7th, at earliest. Just saying.