Post by MortalSuperNinja on Apr 1, 2008 16:47:25 GMT -5
Heres chapter 3 ;D ;D
Chapter 3:Welcome to a larger world..................
Falco was brushing his beak when the doorbell rang.At first
Falco ignored the insessant Ding Dong,but the noise continued,
and soon ,Falco had no choice but to open the door.Outside in
the rain,stood a red fox,clad in a vest and standard military gear.
"Hello my feathered friend."said the mammal"I am Fox
Mcloud of the Smash Bureau of investigation,otherwise known as
the S.B.I.I've come on a recruitment mission for you."
Falco could hardly beleive the nerve of this prankster.Everyone
knew that the S.B.I. were elite secret agents,and that they would
never come to the door of an average citizen like Falco.
"Ha ha"said the bird.He could take a joke"very funny.Now how
about you leave me alone and we get on with our lives."
Falco winced at the sharpness of his own words.Well it serves
that punk right for disturbing the peace.Falco winced again .He sounded like his father.
"You misunderstand Lombardi."muttered Fox"I won't take no
for an answer."
"Yeah,like you're gonna take on the Smash fighting champ"
declared Falco,flexing his muscles."Bring it on!"
"Very well"said Fox as he leaped into the air.
Falco was caught completely off guard.the speed of the Fox was
unparalleled even by Myamoto sensei.In a few seconds ,Falco
was unconscious and being carried to a van at the edge of his dr
iveway.
................................................................................................
Wario and Mona were waiting in the van.
"Did you get the new recruit?"asked the fat italien
"Yeah yeah lardbags"said Fox,setting Falco down"Step on it Mona
.
As the van quietly drove away Fox couldn't help but think that
this Falco guy had promise.He had almost reacted to the blow.
end of ch.3
comments/criticsm welcome ;D ;D
Chapter 3:Welcome to a larger world..................
Falco was brushing his beak when the doorbell rang.At first
Falco ignored the insessant Ding Dong,but the noise continued,
and soon ,Falco had no choice but to open the door.Outside in
the rain,stood a red fox,clad in a vest and standard military gear.
"Hello my feathered friend."said the mammal"I am Fox
Mcloud of the Smash Bureau of investigation,otherwise known as
the S.B.I.I've come on a recruitment mission for you."
Falco could hardly beleive the nerve of this prankster.Everyone
knew that the S.B.I. were elite secret agents,and that they would
never come to the door of an average citizen like Falco.
"Ha ha"said the bird.He could take a joke"very funny.Now how
about you leave me alone and we get on with our lives."
Falco winced at the sharpness of his own words.Well it serves
that punk right for disturbing the peace.Falco winced again .He sounded like his father.
"You misunderstand Lombardi."muttered Fox"I won't take no
for an answer."
"Yeah,like you're gonna take on the Smash fighting champ"
declared Falco,flexing his muscles."Bring it on!"
"Very well"said Fox as he leaped into the air.
Falco was caught completely off guard.the speed of the Fox was
unparalleled even by Myamoto sensei.In a few seconds ,Falco
was unconscious and being carried to a van at the edge of his dr
iveway.
................................................................................................
Wario and Mona were waiting in the van.
"Did you get the new recruit?"asked the fat italien
"Yeah yeah lardbags"said Fox,setting Falco down"Step on it Mona
.
As the van quietly drove away Fox couldn't help but think that
this Falco guy had promise.He had almost reacted to the blow.
end of ch.3
comments/criticsm welcome ;D ;D
