Post by MortalSuperNinja on Mar 25, 2008 9:28:28 GMT -5
Heres the second chapter ;D
Chapter 2.........................
A caravan of spaceships zoomed through the cosmos.
Leading the group was the Myamoto Comet,Myamoto's personal
starship,containing the Grandmasters of the Myamoto Dojo,
Myamoto(of course),Sakurai,and Reggie.trailing behind the
comet was the Skip,were all the members of the dojo without
ships of their own were riding.Behind them were the two
senior members of the dojo,Falco Lombardi ,In his customized
Arwing,and Meta Knight In the Halberd.
"So"said Falco over comlink"How come you weren't at the
dojo yesterday?"
"I was very sick"said Meta Knight"I don't know what I
had ,but I don't have it now."
"Good"replied Falco"Hey I think I can see the Stadium!"
As the two approached Melee Stadium they were rendered
speechless.It was grander than either of them could have imagi-
ned.The flag of the Smash Kingdom rippled in the wind,and beings
from every Smash state lined the streets.As Meta Knight and Fal-
co prepared to part ways Meta Knight spoke.
"Good luck to you old friend"said Meta"May you bring home
the trophy!"
At that moment everyone but Falco sped toward the
spectator's entrance of the stadium.Falco spotted Knuckles
and his entourage near the contestant's entrance.He was
posing for the media photographers and kissing his muscles.
"What a showoff"muttered Falco as he landed near the
Echidna's group.
As Falco leaped out of his ship a small man materialized
on the announcer's stand.
"Hello everyone,I am Dr.Lobe,and I will be the announcer
this evening." said the man"would our contestants please enter"
Falco walked straight in to the stadium,with Knuckles trailing
behind him ,blowing kisses to all the female reporters.
"I cannot wait to pummel this guy"thought Falco,whose
nervousness had all but disappeared.
Falco entered the cage in the stadium and waited for Knuckles.
When the echidna finally entered the cage the crowd began
cheering like mad.
"The fight will begin in 5..4..3"Dr.Lobe paused a moment"..2
..1...Fight!"
The moment Lobe finished announcing,Knuckles charged with
incredible speed .Falco's nervousness returned ,as he realized
that Knuckles wasn't just a showoff,But an excellent fighter as
well.Due to this momentary pause of realization,however Falco
was struck head on by Knuckles spiked fists.He coughed up alot
of blood,and it dribbled down his beak.
Without a word Knuckles began to prepare for his dramatic
finishing move the "Knuckler".Falco knew that if that mighty blow
struck him he would be knocked out and lose the match for sure.
He couldn't let that happen.Just as Knuckles was about to strike
Falco He leaped out of the way,causing Knuckles to get his fist
stuck in the ground.Falco leaped toward Knuckles striking Him
in the back about twelve times before Knuckles finally freed
himself.
Falco could see that he had weakened Knuckles a great
deal.He could also see that he himself was weakened from loss
of blood.This match had to end soon.It was now or never.
Knuckles wound up the Knuckler once again,While Falco rebound
-ed off the cage.
"Lombardi drill!"screamed Falco as he rotated faster and
faster.
"Taste the Knuckler,rookie"yelled Knuckles as he charged.
The two collided with incredible force.After the collision Knuckles
was unconcious in the corner of the cage,And Falco was standing
clutching his ribs
"Ladies and Gentlemen we have a winner!"shouted Lobe
as he handed Falco the trophy
The crowd cheered for Falco.
.....................................................................................................
Fox turned off his television .
"attention S.B.I HQ."said Fox into his mic"I've found our new
recruit."
end of chapter 2
comments/critiscism welcome ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D
Chapter 2.........................
A caravan of spaceships zoomed through the cosmos.
Leading the group was the Myamoto Comet,Myamoto's personal
starship,containing the Grandmasters of the Myamoto Dojo,
Myamoto(of course),Sakurai,and Reggie.trailing behind the
comet was the Skip,were all the members of the dojo without
ships of their own were riding.Behind them were the two
senior members of the dojo,Falco Lombardi ,In his customized
Arwing,and Meta Knight In the Halberd.
"So"said Falco over comlink"How come you weren't at the
dojo yesterday?"
"I was very sick"said Meta Knight"I don't know what I
had ,but I don't have it now."
"Good"replied Falco"Hey I think I can see the Stadium!"
As the two approached Melee Stadium they were rendered
speechless.It was grander than either of them could have imagi-
ned.The flag of the Smash Kingdom rippled in the wind,and beings
from every Smash state lined the streets.As Meta Knight and Fal-
co prepared to part ways Meta Knight spoke.
"Good luck to you old friend"said Meta"May you bring home
the trophy!"
At that moment everyone but Falco sped toward the
spectator's entrance of the stadium.Falco spotted Knuckles
and his entourage near the contestant's entrance.He was
posing for the media photographers and kissing his muscles.
"What a showoff"muttered Falco as he landed near the
Echidna's group.
As Falco leaped out of his ship a small man materialized
on the announcer's stand.
"Hello everyone,I am Dr.Lobe,and I will be the announcer
this evening." said the man"would our contestants please enter"
Falco walked straight in to the stadium,with Knuckles trailing
behind him ,blowing kisses to all the female reporters.
"I cannot wait to pummel this guy"thought Falco,whose
nervousness had all but disappeared.
Falco entered the cage in the stadium and waited for Knuckles.
When the echidna finally entered the cage the crowd began
cheering like mad.
"The fight will begin in 5..4..3"Dr.Lobe paused a moment"..2
..1...Fight!"
The moment Lobe finished announcing,Knuckles charged with
incredible speed .Falco's nervousness returned ,as he realized
that Knuckles wasn't just a showoff,But an excellent fighter as
well.Due to this momentary pause of realization,however Falco
was struck head on by Knuckles spiked fists.He coughed up alot
of blood,and it dribbled down his beak.
Without a word Knuckles began to prepare for his dramatic
finishing move the "Knuckler".Falco knew that if that mighty blow
struck him he would be knocked out and lose the match for sure.
He couldn't let that happen.Just as Knuckles was about to strike
Falco He leaped out of the way,causing Knuckles to get his fist
stuck in the ground.Falco leaped toward Knuckles striking Him
in the back about twelve times before Knuckles finally freed
himself.
Falco could see that he had weakened Knuckles a great
deal.He could also see that he himself was weakened from loss
of blood.This match had to end soon.It was now or never.
Knuckles wound up the Knuckler once again,While Falco rebound
-ed off the cage.
"Lombardi drill!"screamed Falco as he rotated faster and
faster.
"Taste the Knuckler,rookie"yelled Knuckles as he charged.
The two collided with incredible force.After the collision Knuckles
was unconcious in the corner of the cage,And Falco was standing
clutching his ribs
"Ladies and Gentlemen we have a winner!"shouted Lobe
as he handed Falco the trophy
The crowd cheered for Falco.
.....................................................................................................
Fox turned off his television .
"attention S.B.I HQ."said Fox into his mic"I've found our new
recruit."
end of chapter 2
comments/critiscism welcome ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D
So...Falco isn't part of Star Fox yet? 
