Post by MortalSuperNinja on Mar 22, 2008 12:12:32 GMT -5
Here is the first chapter ;D
CHAPTER 1:Of Apes and Falcons
Solid Snake ran through the underground passagew-
ays of Deathblade city.He had just retrieved a mysterious item
for his superiors.It was wrapped in parchment so even he knew
not what it was.suddenly,Snake's cell phone began to beep.
He reached for it on his belt.
"What is it Hunnigan?"growled Snake into the
mic.
"Were you successful in your mission?"asked Ingrid
Hunnigan.
"Of course I was"said Snake ,gruffly"How are things on
your end?"
"president Olimar was very worried about your
mission's success"chimed Hunnigan"I think he'll be pleased
to hear of your mission's outcome."
Snake turned off his cell phone as he ran into the
distance.
.....................................................................
Falco Lombardi was preparing to train in the
Myamoto dojo .He had been selected to fight Knuckles,
the Smash boxing champion three times running,in a
cage match in Melee stadium,location of the world famous
Brawl fighting tourney.And Falco wasn't about to let himself
lose.
One of Falco's dojomates,Bowser J.R walked over to
him.
"eh buddy,ya nervous?asked the littlest bowser"If
ya are den fogeddabout it.Nervous ain't gonna get ya
nowhere in da ring."
truth be told,Falco was extremely nervous.However he
wasn't about to let the little slimeball know that.
"I'm not nervous at all"lied Falco"Now why don't you
go beat up that dummy with your little friends?"
Dumbfounded by Falco's quick and effortless response
,Bowser J.R waddled away.
Falco got up and walked over to his private training
room.
"Hello Falco"boomed Myamoto"I have selected your
opponent"
As Myamoto spoke these words a gigantic Ape walked
into the room.
"Falco meet Donkey Kong"boomed Myamoto"May
the training begin!"
At that moment,Myamoto and the room melted
away.This was due to an extraordinary being called a R.O.B.
R.O.B's could make a training match seem like a fight in a real
location.
To replace the training room ,A temple appeared around
the ape and Falcon.
"darn it,it's the temple"whined Falco"I hate the temple."
Without warning,Donkey Kong charged at Falco,his fists barely
missing the Falcon's beak.To avoid the big ape's gigantic fist,
Lombardi leaped on to the top of a huge pillar.
"You can run"bellowed the primate "But you can't hide"
.DK leaped into the air towards Falco.He was suprisingly agile
for an animal his size.
"Die you ugly chimp!"whooped Falco as he kicked
Kong in the face.This kind of battle was what Falco lived for.
As DK hurtled toward the ground, Falco leaped after him.
He was going in for the finishing blow,his ultimate technique,
"The Lombardi Drill".Donkey Kong hit the ground hard,and
as he got up Falco realized he was dazed.the perfect
opportunity.Falco had not yet hit the ground.He began to
spin,and before he knew it he was within striking distance
.
"Lombardi Drill"screamed Falco as he rotated at an inhuman speed.
The Falcon's body struck DK's with incredible force,and
had sent the ape flying off the stage.
"Take that fuzzball"said Falco,with an air of confidence.
The temple melted away ,and myamoto,the R.O.B,and
the training room reappeared.
"Robby"asked Myamoto"Could you carry DK to Dr.
Popo's office please?"
without a word the R.O.B picked up DK and left the room.
"Very good Falco"said Myamoto"Get some rest ,you have a
big fight tommorrow with that Knuckles person."
the end of ch.1
comments/criticism welcome. ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D
CHAPTER 1:Of Apes and Falcons
Solid Snake ran through the underground passagew-
ays of Deathblade city.He had just retrieved a mysterious item
for his superiors.It was wrapped in parchment so even he knew
not what it was.suddenly,Snake's cell phone began to beep.
He reached for it on his belt.
"What is it Hunnigan?"growled Snake into the
mic.
"Were you successful in your mission?"asked Ingrid
Hunnigan.
"Of course I was"said Snake ,gruffly"How are things on
your end?"
"president Olimar was very worried about your
mission's success"chimed Hunnigan"I think he'll be pleased
to hear of your mission's outcome."
Snake turned off his cell phone as he ran into the
distance.
.....................................................................
Falco Lombardi was preparing to train in the
Myamoto dojo .He had been selected to fight Knuckles,
the Smash boxing champion three times running,in a
cage match in Melee stadium,location of the world famous
Brawl fighting tourney.And Falco wasn't about to let himself
lose.
One of Falco's dojomates,Bowser J.R walked over to
him.
"eh buddy,ya nervous?asked the littlest bowser"If
ya are den fogeddabout it.Nervous ain't gonna get ya
nowhere in da ring."
truth be told,Falco was extremely nervous.However he
wasn't about to let the little slimeball know that.
"I'm not nervous at all"lied Falco"Now why don't you
go beat up that dummy with your little friends?"
Dumbfounded by Falco's quick and effortless response
,Bowser J.R waddled away.
Falco got up and walked over to his private training
room.
"Hello Falco"boomed Myamoto"I have selected your
opponent"
As Myamoto spoke these words a gigantic Ape walked
into the room.
"Falco meet Donkey Kong"boomed Myamoto"May
the training begin!"
At that moment,Myamoto and the room melted
away.This was due to an extraordinary being called a R.O.B.
R.O.B's could make a training match seem like a fight in a real
location.
To replace the training room ,A temple appeared around
the ape and Falcon.
"darn it,it's the temple"whined Falco"I hate the temple."
Without warning,Donkey Kong charged at Falco,his fists barely
missing the Falcon's beak.To avoid the big ape's gigantic fist,
Lombardi leaped on to the top of a huge pillar.
"You can run"bellowed the primate "But you can't hide"
.DK leaped into the air towards Falco.He was suprisingly agile
for an animal his size.
"Die you ugly chimp!"whooped Falco as he kicked
Kong in the face.This kind of battle was what Falco lived for.
As DK hurtled toward the ground, Falco leaped after him.
He was going in for the finishing blow,his ultimate technique,
"The Lombardi Drill".Donkey Kong hit the ground hard,and
as he got up Falco realized he was dazed.the perfect
opportunity.Falco had not yet hit the ground.He began to
spin,and before he knew it he was within striking distance
.
"Lombardi Drill"screamed Falco as he rotated at an inhuman speed.
The Falcon's body struck DK's with incredible force,and
had sent the ape flying off the stage.
"Take that fuzzball"said Falco,with an air of confidence.
The temple melted away ,and myamoto,the R.O.B,and
the training room reappeared.
"Robby"asked Myamoto"Could you carry DK to Dr.
Popo's office please?"
without a word the R.O.B picked up DK and left the room.
"Very good Falco"said Myamoto"Get some rest ,you have a
big fight tommorrow with that Knuckles person."
the end of ch.1
comments/criticism welcome. ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D