Post by SLE on Nov 10, 2007 2:30:22 GMT -5
*scene 1*
it was an ordinary day. Mario was practicing his moves on a new place he just discovered. when suddenly a shooting star was falling out of the sky. And there was something on the star, something pink. when it crashed the star dissapeared and there was an explosion.out jumped a pink puffball.
: Pyo
Mario:do you know english?
:yes
mario:so what's your name?
:Kirby
Mario:well kirby you wanna help me train?
Kirby:OK
so there they trained untill kirby got hit too hard after training and got turned into a trophy.
Mario:Oh no! kirby!!!
voice:it's okay just tap his stand and he should come back to normal.
*tap*
Mario:it worked!
Kirby:pyo!
Kirby:thanks!
Mario:so who are you?
voice:you don't need to know me all you need to know are the rules of this place.
person:outta my way!
Mario:hey buddy i don't know who you are but all i know is-
*person turns around*
Mario:link? what are you doing here?
Link:i've been trapped here for 7 years!
Mario:is this true voice?
Voice:yes link was one of the first players in this world
link:heh i guess you've met-
*link falls on floor*
Mario:link? link!
*end of chapter 1*
so waddya think? i made it in an hour
*scene 2*
We now join some players in a stadium.It's green, has a big screen in the back,and transforms.From here we see yet another puffball yet this one is more jiggly than the other one with mario.we alse see a humanoid cat thing.
jiggly puffball:so who might i say am i fighting today?
Mewtwo: mewtwo
Jiggly puffball:and you can call me jigglypuff(i was so close to getting the name)
*jigglypuff punches mewtwo and sends him flying upward*
*mewtwo electricutes his whole body while landing and hits jigglypuff*
out of nowhere comes a platform and out appears a pokeball wait no 2 pokeballs
*pokeballs open releasing 2 pokemon*
jigglypuff: hey i know you! you're pikachu!
mewtwo:so who is the other one?
jigglypuff:idk but it looks like mbf jill
other pokemon:wtf???
pikachu:actually this is my *Blocked out by annoucer yelling ready!* Pichu
Pichu:*murmuring*i do not look like he friend jill at all
Announcer:GO!!
Pikachu:so i guess we shoul be fighting to get to the last level
Pikachu ally Pichu
Jigglypuff ally Mewtwo
Announcer:GO again!!!
the battle was long and 3 lived but eventually team pikachu won even though pichu lost all his lives.
Suddenly 2 figures come out and yelled PK thunder
Pikachu:so i guess you've finally been put into this tournament haven't you ninten?
Ness:My name is ness!!!!!
Pichu:and you're lucas right?
Lucas:Uh huh
Ness:you can't steal my taunt to use in dialouge you've already stolen my moves!
Lucas:fine i'll change them
ness:thank you
Lucas:umm my moves were already different from yours the only thing even close to similar was my version of your pk thunder but i changed it to PK love
Pikachu:SHUT THE HECK UP!!!THIS IS FOR FIGHTING NOT BLABBING ON AND ON AND ON ABOUT STUFF THAT EVERYONE CARES ABOUT!!!
announcer:Sudden death!!!
Pichu:Wha?!?! we didn't even fight!
Announcer:it was a time battle and you guys wasted about 12 minutes of my life.
ness:Oh ok
Lucas:ready ness?
Ness:okay lucas
both:PK thunder
*hits themselves launching eathother far past that stage*
Lucas:ness? where are you?
Ness:Lucas? lucas? Dang why is it so cold?
Lucas:is that mario over there?Hey mario!
ness:ahhh!!! darkness is rising!!! wait this is that annoying ice stage isn't it? ok so i gotta keep steady with the screen.
*grabs ledge near a house*
yet another new person:can we help you?
End of scene 2
i got this one in 1 hour and 15 minutes
it was an ordinary day. Mario was practicing his moves on a new place he just discovered. when suddenly a shooting star was falling out of the sky. And there was something on the star, something pink. when it crashed the star dissapeared and there was an explosion.out jumped a pink puffball.
: Pyo
Mario:do you know english?
:yes
mario:so what's your name?
:Kirby
Mario:well kirby you wanna help me train?
Kirby:OK
so there they trained untill kirby got hit too hard after training and got turned into a trophy.
Mario:Oh no! kirby!!!
voice:it's okay just tap his stand and he should come back to normal.
*tap*
Mario:it worked!
Kirby:pyo!
Kirby:thanks!
Mario:so who are you?
voice:you don't need to know me all you need to know are the rules of this place.
person:outta my way!
Mario:hey buddy i don't know who you are but all i know is-
*person turns around*
Mario:link? what are you doing here?
Link:i've been trapped here for 7 years!
Mario:is this true voice?
Voice:yes link was one of the first players in this world
link:heh i guess you've met-
*link falls on floor*
Mario:link? link!
*end of chapter 1*
so waddya think? i made it in an hour
*scene 2*
We now join some players in a stadium.It's green, has a big screen in the back,and transforms.From here we see yet another puffball yet this one is more jiggly than the other one with mario.we alse see a humanoid cat thing.
jiggly puffball:so who might i say am i fighting today?
Mewtwo: mewtwo
Jiggly puffball:and you can call me jigglypuff(i was so close to getting the name)
*jigglypuff punches mewtwo and sends him flying upward*
*mewtwo electricutes his whole body while landing and hits jigglypuff*
out of nowhere comes a platform and out appears a pokeball wait no 2 pokeballs
*pokeballs open releasing 2 pokemon*
jigglypuff: hey i know you! you're pikachu!
mewtwo:so who is the other one?
jigglypuff:idk but it looks like mbf jill
other pokemon:wtf???
pikachu:actually this is my *Blocked out by annoucer yelling ready!* Pichu
Pichu:*murmuring*i do not look like he friend jill at all
Announcer:GO!!
Pikachu:so i guess we shoul be fighting to get to the last level
Pikachu ally Pichu
Jigglypuff ally Mewtwo
Announcer:GO again!!!
the battle was long and 3 lived but eventually team pikachu won even though pichu lost all his lives.
Suddenly 2 figures come out and yelled PK thunder
Pikachu:so i guess you've finally been put into this tournament haven't you ninten?
Ness:My name is ness!!!!!
Pichu:and you're lucas right?
Lucas:Uh huh
Ness:you can't steal my taunt to use in dialouge you've already stolen my moves!
Lucas:fine i'll change them
ness:thank you
Lucas:umm my moves were already different from yours the only thing even close to similar was my version of your pk thunder but i changed it to PK love
Pikachu:SHUT THE HECK UP!!!THIS IS FOR FIGHTING NOT BLABBING ON AND ON AND ON ABOUT STUFF THAT EVERYONE CARES ABOUT!!!
announcer:Sudden death!!!
Pichu:Wha?!?! we didn't even fight!
Announcer:it was a time battle and you guys wasted about 12 minutes of my life.
ness:Oh ok
Lucas:ready ness?
Ness:okay lucas
both:PK thunder
*hits themselves launching eathother far past that stage*
Lucas:ness? where are you?
Ness:Lucas? lucas? Dang why is it so cold?
Lucas:is that mario over there?Hey mario!
ness:ahhh!!! darkness is rising!!! wait this is that annoying ice stage isn't it? ok so i gotta keep steady with the screen.
*grabs ledge near a house*
yet another new person:can we help you?
End of scene 2
i got this one in 1 hour and 15 minutes