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Post by LeoTMNT on Dec 13, 2007 9:22:31 GMT -5
This is one of my fic's I typed up, I hope you guy's injoy.
SuperStar Smash bros.Z
Episode 1
The awakening portals
It was a dark and rainy day at the mushroom kingdom.
"Um, it hasn't been this rainy in a long time." Luigi said looking up from the ground.
"Luigi look on the bright side, after all this rain clears up there will be a nice big rainbow." Mario said trying to lighten up his brother.
"Sure, that will be later some time, what do we do in the meantime?" Luigi asked crossing his arms.
"Luigi you need to relax, we have a day off to sit back and relax and your complaining." Mario said.
"Let's just go watch some T.V." Luigi said standing to his feet.
"Now your talking." Mario said walking after him.
Mario grabs the remote and flips through some of the channels.
"Could we just watch something please." Luigi asked.
Mario stops it on the news channel.
News/Reporter: "The tournament portals of the past and feature are opening, there are also other portals that we have never seen before."
"What, the portals shouldn't open this quick, the super smash bros. tournament isn't for another month." Mario said jumping up from the coach.
"They also said there where some new portals opening." Luigi said.
"I say we go check it out." Mario said.
Luigi and Mario run out the door and see many portals in the sky.
"Mario." Yoshi said as Mario turned to face him.
"It's Yoshi." Luigi pointed out.
"There's portals all over the place." Yoshi said with a tense voice.
An arwing comes flying out of one of the portals and lands right in front of the three of them.
"It's Fox Mccloud." Luigi said.
"What's going on, there's portals here and back at." Fox said as he is rudely cut off by Mario.
"Yah, do you think there are invaders?" Mario asked.
"I really don't know, let me radio for back up." Fox responded, then he used a device attached to his arm.
"What's going on?" Yoshi said to himself.
"Falco, the portals leads to the mushroom kingdom, tell Krystal and Slippy to stay put." Fox communicated.
"I say we jump through one of these portals and see what's on the other end." Luigi said ready to jump in.
One minute later Falco's arwing lands next to Fox's.
"I brought some company." Falco said.
Link jumps off the right wing.
"Anyone have an idea what's going on?" Link asked.
An asteroid from space fires down sending them into a portal.
What will happen to them, find out in the next episode of SuperStar smash bros.Z.
To Be Continued
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Post by Ghost on Dec 13, 2007 9:31:26 GMT -5
good setup.....Continue Please!
Sounds good so far.
(i'll delete your thread in Old Stories)
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Post by bobsnicket on Dec 13, 2007 17:45:58 GMT -5
Hey you deleted my comment! Good job! Yes, do continue...
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Post by LeoTMNT on Dec 13, 2007 17:51:03 GMT -5
good setup.....Continue Please! Sounds good so far. (i'll delete your thread in Old Stories) Alright.
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Post by LeoTMNT on Dec 13, 2007 19:11:53 GMT -5
SuperStar Smash bros.Z
Episode 2
The abandoned
The 6 warriors land on the streets of what appears to be network. The portal they came through closes.
"Oh great, now what." Falco said looking over at Fox.
"We'll divide into groups of three, Luigi and Link will come with me." Fox said.
Luigi, Link, and Fox run off to find another portal.
"Well fella's, I guess we better go to the west." Mario says.
"I'll take lead." Falco says with proudness in his voice.
"What happened at this place, it looks like it was nuked up or something." Yoshi exclaimed.
"All of these buildings are around, but no people." Mario said rubbing his chin.
"This place is a Rec, let me radio Krystal" Falco said as he looked down at his transmitter.
"Mario how are we going to get home?" Yoshi asked walking up to Mario.
"We'll find a way." Mario said.
"No response, we must be in another universe." Falco said looking up into the sky.
"There's gotta be someone around who could give us directions." Mario thought to himself.
"I don't know, but we should give this place a look around." Falco said.
Fox's Group.
"We have to find a way out of here." Luigi said with a cold shiver.
"Ha ha ha ha!!!!!!!!!!!" A voice laughed in the near distance.
Fox pulls out his blaster.
"Who's there." Fox said holding his weapon tight in hand.
"It came from over there." Luigi said.
"No it was that way." Link said disagreeing.
"You two must have hearing problems, it came from that way." Fox said.
"Fine we'll split up, and regroup back in ten." Link said.
The three of them run in different directions.
"I know I'm right and I can, ah." Fox said as he ran into some web.
Fox does his best to get free. He uses all of his strength to wiggle free, but all his attemps fail.
"Oh great, I can't reach phone, which means I can't radio falco for back up." Fox said.
Down another street.
"I thought I heard something in that building." Link said.
Link cuts the door knob off and walks inside.
"It's coming from down stairs." Link said as he slowly made his decent.
Mario's group.
"Look another portal." Mario said.
A young male falls to the ground.
"I escaped that place." He said.
Falco points his blaster at there visitor.
"Who are?" Falco asked.
"You dare point a gun at me, take this!"
25 seconds later.
"What was suppose to happen?" Mario said confused.
"My powers there gone, where am I?" He said.
"First off who are you?" Yoshi asked.
"My names Juunanagou, but you can just call me Android 17." He said.
Is Android 17 a friend or an enemy, read on to the next episode to find out.
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Post by bobsnicket on Dec 14, 2007 1:53:58 GMT -5
SuperStar Smash bros.Z Is Android 17 a friend or an enemy, read on to the next episode to find out.
I would...if I could! ;D
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Post by LeoTMNT on Dec 14, 2007 23:36:01 GMT -5
SuperStar Smash bros.Z
episode 3
Friends and Foes
"Android 17 huh, so who do you work for, Samus?" Yoshi asked.
"I'm from the DBZ universe, what is this place?" #17 asked.
"We were wondering if you knew." Falco said crossing his arms.
"I think it's safe to put your gun away, I'm on your side, for now anyway." Juunana said walking passed them.
"First we should regroup with the others." Mario said.
Fox's group
"Ah, is anyone there? I wonder who put this web here." Fox said as he heard the same laughing from earlier.
Fox can hear something slowly coming down towards him. His body tenses up as it get's closer.
"Who are you?" Fox said as he saw a creature hanging upside down on web.
The creature leaps off of the web.
"Your not who I was waiting for." It said.
"Who are you, and what do you want?" Fox said as the creature approaches him.
"I am Venom." It responds.
The creature turns into a man.
"I'm Edward Brock, me and the Symbiote make Venom." He said.
"What!, now you've just lost me." Fox said.
"You could be of help." Eddie Brock said to Fox as he cut his down from the web.
"So what's your name?" Eddie asked.
"I am Fox Mccloud." Fox said as they shook hands.
Link's group
"Ok here I go." Link said as he approaches a door.
Link kicks the door down and finds three more.
"The noise is coming from the basement." Link said to himself.
Link opens the last door and walks down the stairs. He sees a man working on some papers.
"So you showed up, green one." He said.
The man turns around.
"Who are you?" Link asked.
"Just call me Agent Bishop, your not the one who I was expecting." He said as he looked over at Link.
"What are you doing?" Link asked.
A creature jumps in between the two of them.
"Well, well, the turtle Leonardo." Agent Bishop said clapping three times.
"Bishop, I knew I would find you here." Leo said.
"Could someone fill me in on what's going on?" Link asked looking confused.
"I can't have you two interfering, my new super soldiers will be unbeatable this time." Agent Bishop said.
"This guy must be the bad of the two." Link thought to himself as he shoots his chain and throws his boomerang at agent bishop.
Bishop grabs the other end of the chain and doges the boomerang twice.
"You think you can beat me with these toys of yours." He said.
Bishop swings the chain sending Link smashing through the wall. Agent Bishop fixes his shades back in place.
"Good day Leonardo." He said.
Then he throws a grenade at the building walls making it unstable.
"It's going to come down, I have to get him out of here." Leonardo said running over to Link's body.
Leo picks up Link and runs out of the building as it falls down.
Fifteen minutes pass by
"There over there." Mario said.
The whole gang is back together.
"We have to get off this planet, it's going to explode." Eddie Brock said.
"What are you talking about?" Leonardo asked.
"We don't have much time to explain, come on." Eddie Brock said.
Will they make it out in time?
To Be Continued
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Post by Mariomasher on Dec 15, 2007 17:24:05 GMT -5
this story is insane!!continue ps KARMA
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Post by LeoTMNT on Dec 16, 2007 11:17:55 GMT -5
SuperStar Smash bros.Z
Episode 4
Return home
"Ill carry link" Luigi said picking him up.
"look a portal." Falco said.
"let's go." Mario said as they raced toward the portal that was closing.
They all jump through the portal and land back in mushroom kingdom.
They stand up to see three creatures.
"You guys made it out to." Leo said.
"Hey green guy, you want to introduce yourself and your friends?" Fox asked crossing his arms.
"I'm Leonardo, this is Raphael, Donatello, and Mikey." Leo said hugging his bro's.
"Nice to meet you all, I am Fox Mccloud, and this is Falco." Fox said.
"Sweet who's ships are these!" Mikey yelled.
"There not called ships, there called arwings, as in ours." Falco said with a grunt.
"Mikey why don't you just keep your mouth shut." Raph said.
"Well none of you really know what's going on do you?" Mario asked.
Everyone shrugs there shoulders.
"We have lots to do, come on." Mario said.
On a near by building.
"Yes, Leonardo is here, everything is going according to plan. Extra bonus, his brothers and some other guys." Bowser said.
"Papa, when are you going to tell me what's so important about Leonardo?" Bowser Jr. asked.
"In time son, in time." Bowser said as he began to laugh.
To be continued.
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Post by Big Boss on Dec 16, 2007 21:45:14 GMT -5
I think mewtwo and freieza should join together!
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Post by LeoTMNT on Dec 16, 2007 21:51:28 GMT -5
I think mewtwo and freieza should join together! Don't worry, the two of them are in. I'm actually up to chapter 29, just editing and posting. You'll notice when it get's up to chapter twenty one there is better discription.
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Post by LeoTMNT on Dec 16, 2007 22:07:44 GMT -5
SuperStar Smash bros.Z
Episode 5
The unknown
"Come my son we must return back to the castle at once." Bowser said with a grunt.
"Yes sir." Bowser Jr replied.
Back on the streets
"Falco lets head back to the ship, we have to get some more weapons." Fox explained.
The two hopped into their arwings, and fly back up to great fox.
Raphael: "look, the portals are closing up."
Mikey: "is that a bad thing or a good thing?"
Mario: "I really don't know at this point."
Luigi: "look it's."
a smoke bomb comes down knocking them all out.
Later.
Android 17 opens his eyes to see Fox standing there.
Fox: "what are you doing laying on the ground and where are the others?"
Android 17: "I don't know where they are, all I remember seeing is a blue dinosaur throwing a smoke bomb down at us."
Falco: "so you woke up alone."
#17 turns around to see falco and a couple others.
Falco: "this is Krystal, Slippy, and Samus."
Slippy: "nice to meet you."
#17: "great, more animal creatures."
Falco: "hey watch it."
Fox: "we don't have time to waste, we better split up."
Samus: "I'll search over near the north."
Fox: "men these days, I said groups you will go with the android, Slippy you come with me, and Falco and Krystal will search over in the west."
They all split up.
On the roof tops
#17: "your suppose to be some kind of bounty hunter, so why do you let Fox boss you around, are you being paid to help?"
He gets no response.
#17: "ok, so are you a male or female, are you a creature like fox?"
he still doesn't get a response.
#17: "so much for."
Samus: "I thought I heard something."
They jump onto a building and look through a window.
Mario: "let us go."
Luigi: "what do you want this time."
Mikey: "ah, he's like Agent Bishop with the glasses and all but as a Yoshi."
Boshi: "don't get me confused with that lame brain, I have brought you all here to compete in my next racing tournament."
Raphael: "then why are we tied up?"
Boshi: "because if I said your racing for team Boshi."
Yoshi: "no way!"
Boshi: "that's what I thought you might say."
Boshi places brain devices on everyone's head.
Link: "I don't really know how to drive a cart."
Boshi: "don't worry you'll learn."
Mikey: "wait I'll be part of Boshi team."
Raphael: "what."
Mikey: "so how about taking these chains off."
Boshi: "with pleasure."
Boshi takes his chains off.
Mikey: "I can't believe you where that easy to fool."
with that he kicks boshi to the ground.
Boshi: "guards!"
Many other Yoshi's run in.
Mikey: "oh great."
Boshi: "now what do you plan to do, there's no one to help you."
#17 and Samus jump down.
#17: "that's where we come in."
Boshi: "destroy the three of them."
To Be Continued.
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Post by bobsnicket on Dec 16, 2007 22:20:51 GMT -5
Nice! One piece of advice, more description in between the dialogue; it can get a little confusing at times...
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Post by Mariomasher on Dec 17, 2007 17:47:27 GMT -5
love it!!continue plz!
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Post by LeoTMNT on Dec 18, 2007 18:32:17 GMT -5
SuperStar Smash bros.Z Episode 6 Bowsers partner
"I'll take the, ah shell there's to many of them." Mikey said spinning his chucks.
"Just take what you can get." Samus said in a robotic tone. Samus fires a missile off scaring off all of the Yoshi's, except Boshi.
"well I see I underestimated my foes." Boshi said with a grin.
Boshi clicks a big red button on the remote he is holding. Then a big door opens.
"Meet Boshster." Boshi said with an excited tone.
Boshi jumps into a giant robot that looks like him, equipped with many weapons.
Samus shoots another missile but this time Boshi crushes it with the Boshster.
"What is that thing made of?" Android 17 asked hoping for a response.
"I don't know, but we have to take it down." Mikey replied.
Before Mikey could act he is blasted by a laser from the Boshster's eyes which sends him through a wall.
"My turn." Seventeen grinned.
He runs toward the machine but is quickly stomped on. Samus shoots her electric chain at the robotic yoshi but it grab's her chain with it's mouth and swings her to the ground.
"Yes!." Boshi hissed as he looked over at Samus.
When Boshi looks down he is kicked by Mikey, then #17 punches the chest.
"Move out of the way." Samus said.
Samus blasts Boshi and the Boshster through the wall.
"Well I see the ropes have turned on me." Boshi said as he adjusted his shades and jumped out of a nearby window.
"Something tells me we haven't seen the last of him." Mikey said putting his weapons away.
"So I guess we better untie the others, hey where did samus go?" #17 asked.
"That's just his style, you'll get use to it." Fox replied.
Bowser's castle
"Now get out of my face, I don't really have time for failure!" Bowser yelled.
"Yes sir." A koopa said as he wobbled off.
Someone else enters the room.
"Who dare's to enter without Knocking!" Bowser said enraged.
Bowser hears laughing in the distance.
"Well, well, King Boo what brings you to my castle?" Bowser asked seddling down.
"Hello bowser, I think me and you are after the same thing." King Boo replied.
"And what might that be?" Bowser said as he sat up in his throne chair.
"Mario of course, and his new friends." King Boo said.
"Why would you want to help me?" Bowser asked.
"To see Mario bow at your feet." King Boo said.
"Ha, I can do that without your help, why have you really come?" Bowser asked getting impatient.
"Gannondorf has formed an alliance with some guy called Shr, that's all I got." King Boo said.
"What do you mean that's all you got?" Bowser asked.
"One of my minions was in a battle then died trying to tell me who our new foe is." King Boo said.
"Why where you battling Gannon? I haven't seen that guy since the last smash tourney."
"It's not really anything you need to know, so what about my offer?" Boo asked changing the subject.
"You've got yourself a deal." Bowser said.
"Now let me tell you of our other enemies." King Boo said.
"What there's more?" Bowser replied sinking into his chair.
To Be continued
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