Marluxia
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Post by Marluxia on May 11, 2008 18:32:31 GMT -5
Book 1 Fire Emblem chapter one Path of Radiance we start of this story in a grassy meadow some ware in Crimea its been a few years after the mad kings war were zoom in to Ike staring into the clouds remembering what has happened to him over the past couple of years when Soren comes and telles him that theres going to be a invasion "Whos invading"said Ike "Altea" said Soren " we have to go tell Queen Elincia" said Ike they are fifty meters in font of the castle when a summoning circle appears .out comes the Black Knight " you will not pass"Ike charges in and trys to hit the black knight with his sword " Soren go tell Queen Elincia whats going on "Soren goes and runs to the castle .the black knight push ike away and by using his Alondite sends a eclipse wave toured Soren but a red hair man stops it with his sword "Who are you" said ike "im Roy and i think that you need my help" " no this is my fight " the black knight swings his sword at ike and he rolls out of the way . Roy comes charging in but is blocked ike swings his sword but is also blocked Roy swings around to block a sword from Zephiel roy uses his Blazer move which sends Zephiel flying backwards "that was too easy"said Roy
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Post by Kalrad (THE MUFFIN!!!) on May 14, 2008 3:35:32 GMT -5
You should do it a bit differently... like. "Who's invading?" Ike yelled.
"Altea." Soren called from the window.
"We have to notify Queen Elincia of this problem." Ike said hurriedly as he rushed for the queen's throne room. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ as an example.
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Post by Marluxia on May 14, 2008 14:28:28 GMT -5
You should do it a bit differently... like. "Who's invading?" Ike yelled. "Altea." Soren called from the window. "We have to notify Queen Elincia of this problem." Ike said hurriedly as he rushed for the queen's throne room. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ as an example. wtf its my story do post stuff like that
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