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Post by mew?(SS) IS BACK on Apr 15, 2008 9:37:45 GMT -5
CHRASH BOOOOOMMMMMMMMM  i give up i cant make a story going with only me in it sry for those of u who like mewtwo i do also and that is why i give up i might evven leave this place and i will keep this up until saturday |
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Big Boss
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Post by Big Boss on Apr 15, 2008 9:39:22 GMT -5
woa
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Post by Ghost on Apr 15, 2008 10:17:13 GMT -5
 cool sprites though |
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Post by Mariomasher on Apr 15, 2008 10:32:01 GMT -5
i need more info but maybe like a clash between Mewtwo forms?
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Bert
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Post by Bert on Apr 15, 2008 17:35:44 GMT -5
This should be in the fanfic character section, shouldn't it?
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Dwayne Wadepoop321
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Post by Dwayne Wadepoop321 on Apr 15, 2008 17:40:38 GMT -5
more info
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Post by Ghost on Apr 15, 2008 18:28:59 GMT -5
TIME TO BE RUDE
If you're gonna call it chapter one....i'd like to see some prose starting anytime now rather than a bunch of sprites with no story information or anything
END OF RUDENESS
sorry about that......i feel better now.
The sprites are still rocking the house, but i'd like more storyline.
Looks like good characters and has some potential to be good, but i can't tell yet
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Dwayne Wadepoop321
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Post by Dwayne Wadepoop321 on Apr 15, 2008 19:49:07 GMT -5
Ghost does have a point, when isaw tthis thread i thought it was a STORY chapter, but it was just sprites maybe you should call this like, the character thread for they story
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Post by mew?(SS) IS BACK on Apr 15, 2008 20:01:50 GMT -5
listen im waiting till that poll ends when it does ill start the story depending on the poll if its cool or needs more info i star if lame or ok i dont start
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Post by Ghost on Apr 15, 2008 20:06:24 GMT -5
we can't decide if it's good or lame till you write something, but your characters are good
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Post by mew?(SS) IS BACK on Apr 16, 2008 10:19:43 GMT -5
there i posted part 1 of chapter 1
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Post by ¡Yiff Police! on Apr 16, 2008 10:28:39 GMT -5
Its odd...I can not sya if its good or not..
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Post by mew?(SS) IS BACK on Apr 17, 2008 19:06:41 GMT -5
LOOK now i modifieid it
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Bert
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Post by Bert on Apr 17, 2008 19:09:20 GMT -5
Well, I see you're having trouble writing it... What I would do, is watch TV. That way, you'll get ideas. And then you can put the story here. Hope I helped  |
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Post by mew?(SS) IS BACK on Apr 17, 2008 19:19:56 GMT -5
thank u but i cant write story all by my self ive only done that once but thanku
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i give up i cant make a story going with only me in it sry for those of u who like mewtwo 
