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Post by Kart Brawla on Apr 19, 2008 13:24:41 GMT -5
Dark Age: Chapter 1| Legend: "talking" *action* [whispering] 'thought' - censored - {music} One day Mario was sitting in the castle with Princess Peach. Mario had just saved her from Bowser again. Peach: "Thank you Mario!" Mario: "Your welcome!" Peach: "Now go give me a drink." Mario: "What kind of drink?" Peach: "Grape. Oh and while you're at it, get some Caviar." Mario: "But there is no Caviar here." Peach: "THEN MAKE SOME!" Mario: "Ok." *walks away* [spoiled little brat.] Peach: "WHAT DID YOU SAY!!!! Mario: "Nothing." 'such a b----' Mario was going to get some Caviar when..... Snake appeared out of a box! Snake: "It's Showtime." Mario: "Who the heck are you?" Snake: "A person that is about to kill your precious Peach. I have her targeted. FIRE!" Please listen to this great song from brawl. www.youtube.com/watch?v=ft7458wmD6k&feature=related{theme music ^ start} Fox: "REFLECTOR!" *reflects back to snake* Snake: "SHIELD! Not bad." Captain Falcon comes from behind. Captain Falcon (CF): "FALCON PUNCH!" *snake goes flying* {theme music ^^ ends} Fox: We need you Mario and Peach. We need to defeat the Evil Game Master. But first we need to get a few other people. CF: Come on, lets go! What will happen? Will Snake recover? What will happen? Does Mario really like Peach? Oh and did I mention: What will happen? FIND OUT ON THE NEXT CHAPTER OF DARK AGE!
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Post by MortalSuperNinja on Apr 19, 2008 17:19:53 GMT -5
pretty cool,but you might want to add nontalking sequences in th e next chapter
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Post by bobsnicket on Apr 19, 2008 17:55:12 GMT -5
You may want to change the name because I believe Twilight's story had the same name...
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Post by Kart Brawla on Apr 19, 2008 19:56:29 GMT -5
pretty cool,but you might want to add nontalking sequences in th e next chapter What do you mean?
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Post by MortalSuperNinja on Apr 20, 2008 9:36:01 GMT -5
I mean parts where no one talks.you know action sequences
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Post by Kart Brawla on Apr 20, 2008 12:04:19 GMT -5
Ok cool. I'll try to include that in the next chapter.
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Post by Dwayne Wadepoop321 on Apr 20, 2008 13:13:00 GMT -5
It was ok
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Post by Kalrad (THE MUFFIN!!!) on Apr 22, 2008 2:11:14 GMT -5
Dude, that was funny as hell.
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Post by Kart Brawla on Apr 22, 2008 15:33:07 GMT -5
Dude, that was funny as hell. Thanks. And can somebody move this to Old Stories, there's a new chapter.
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Post by ready2brawl on Apr 22, 2008 16:05:34 GMT -5
Moved.
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Post by Kart Brawla on Apr 22, 2008 17:37:08 GMT -5
Thanks Devaux.
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