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Post by bobsnicket on Sept 3, 2008 17:19:37 GMT -5
That...was a chapter?  Have you seen the length of my "chapters?" It's really too short for a comment, sorry.  |
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Bert
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Post by Bert on Sept 3, 2008 17:28:58 GMT -5
Yeah, really...
I get the feeling you just wrote this as you went along... which is a bad idea, cause then your fanfic is destined to fail.
If you're gonna write a fanfic, I know some examples you should look at:
-The Trophies
-The Destroyer
-The Nintendo War
These will really help you write a good fanfic.
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Post by The King Of Darkness on Sept 4, 2008 7:10:16 GMT -5
And don't forget Nightmare In The Nintendo Universe!!! That will help! ;D
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Post by theauthor on Sept 4, 2008 11:21:21 GMT -5
ok look at new name:opened it will be really really long before i post a new chapter.
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Kirby King
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Post by Kirby King on Sept 4, 2008 11:23:18 GMT -5
not that long
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<--- red head is excel. 
sorry bert i couldn't do it..
