The Destiny. Intro: The Chant

[howl56]

It sat by the heatfull fire waiting...A square alter loomed before it, on the alter lay a circle of 17 purple leaves. It set down the thing it held in its left hand on the alter in the center on a wide clump of reeds & seaweed. It closed it's eyes, clentched it's hands and rised to it's feet.

I am stronger than the Strongest Demon
Sturdier than the thickest tree
Faster than the fastest
When the night is at its Darkest Hour & all is silent as Death I am near.
When slaughtered reek & the blood is shed I am come.
I am hunting you...you will never break free.
YOU ARE MINE TO COMMAND!

The fire slunk back for the shadows to rise. There was waiting eerie silence-except for the slow drip of waterdrops from the cave ceiling.

It drew a knife & slit a scar on its forehead deep enough for it to bleed & pressed its finger to the bleeding wound. With the blood on its finger it moved the finger onto the thing on the alter.

It sang in a voice like a demon:
Seeing red again, seeing red again, seeing red again, seeing red again, seeing red again, seeing red again, seeing red again, seeing rreeeeeeeeeeeed!
'It is done.' It breathed in a harsh tone.

[bobsnicket]

So far so good; you have a good writing style. This has potential, although I haven't seen as of yet a single video game reference...

And yes, that's a crime here. (jk)

[Dobs]

have NO idea what that meant.... but very intriguing nonetheless

[The King Of Darkness]

Confused. But i thought your writing kept my attention.