Post by gamergod351 on Mar 12, 2009 17:35:38 GMT -5
After Tabuu’s defeat all the brawlers continued on their fights and tournaments. In the finale it was Pikachu vs. Marth.
“NO HOLDING BACK MARTH!” Pikachu shouted.
“I don’t plan too!” Marth yelled back. Of course Pikachu’s shouldn’t talk but in the world of SSB they learned from an unknown force to speak. People have been shouting and cheering at the fight and the other brawlers watched on the sideline Balcony.
Zelda had a concerned look on her face “Zelda are u okay something seems to be bothering you” peach said. Zelda looked at her and smiled
“Always worried about me aren’t you? I’m fine it’s just that I sense a disturbance somewhere”. Ness overheard what she said “Then so it seems I’m not the only one getting that feeling huh? He says. Lucas also admits getting that feeling. That something BAD is about to happen.
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The battle was about to begin and Marth and Pikachu ready to fight. “3…2….1…GO!” the announcer yells. Marth charges to Pikachu but he stands his ground readying a skull bash. Marth lunges his sword at Pikachu but Pikachu cancels it with the skull bash attack Pikachu jumps in the air and releases a thunder jolt and it hits Marth’s right shoulder. He endures the pain and strikes upward hitting Pikachu he took to the air hurt and Marth waited to strike again. But Pikachu quickly regained mobility and used quick attack to dodge Marth’s next attack. Pikachu now behind Marth turn and was about to strike at Marth but he also turns around and was about to strike too.
Then all of a sudden everything around the field goes dim and Marth and Pikachu were thrown across the stage by an unknown force which pretty much caused a tie but that wasn’t important to the brawlers. Ike, Jigglypuff, Mewtwo and Pichu quickly went to help get Marth and Pikachu back to normal.
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The other brawlers gazed at the stage which a strange hole appeared above it. What came out were Primids but they looked different, instead of purple, red, or metal like they were slightly bigger and were dark blackish red color then the purple ones. Fox and Falco jumps down first followed by the others Olimar and Luigi were about to run away but captain falcon grabbed them and threw them to battle. Mewtwo, Jigglypuff, and revived them when there in their Trophy stand form. Pikachu and Marth look at the wild fight going on against the Primids. The reacted quickly and joined the battle.
Yoshi egg rolled at the Primids and made them fly in the air and Meta knight followed and used drill rush slicing through the Primids while there airborne. Red throws out Charizard and burnt smashed and ripped apart most of the Primids.
Zelda, Ness and Lucas fuses there projectile attacks and throws the combo at the Primids with so much force it flew them off to space before they ever evaporated. Pit soon enough came in and helped fight them.
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Just when the battle was finally over all of a sudden what came out of the portal wasn’t a Primids no more but now creatures called Heartless. Mario and Pit were about to call off a retreat because the team was getting weary of battle but then all of a sudden a 2 warriors came out of the portal and slashed the heartless to pieces one weapon was a big wrench and the other was a sword-like key.
“Who are you and what is going on here!” Pit yelled out in frustration. The two strangers pulled down their hoods one look like a cat but all greasy and another was a young boy “I am Ratchet and my partner here is Sora” the cat like person said. “Our dimension is being attacked by a being known as Debuu and we need have no choice but to ask of your help” Sora says.
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“NO HOLDING BACK MARTH!” Pikachu shouted.
“I don’t plan too!” Marth yelled back. Of course Pikachu’s shouldn’t talk but in the world of SSB they learned from an unknown force to speak. People have been shouting and cheering at the fight and the other brawlers watched on the sideline Balcony.
Zelda had a concerned look on her face “Zelda are u okay something seems to be bothering you” peach said. Zelda looked at her and smiled
“Always worried about me aren’t you? I’m fine it’s just that I sense a disturbance somewhere”. Ness overheard what she said “Then so it seems I’m not the only one getting that feeling huh? He says. Lucas also admits getting that feeling. That something BAD is about to happen.
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The battle was about to begin and Marth and Pikachu ready to fight. “3…2….1…GO!” the announcer yells. Marth charges to Pikachu but he stands his ground readying a skull bash. Marth lunges his sword at Pikachu but Pikachu cancels it with the skull bash attack Pikachu jumps in the air and releases a thunder jolt and it hits Marth’s right shoulder. He endures the pain and strikes upward hitting Pikachu he took to the air hurt and Marth waited to strike again. But Pikachu quickly regained mobility and used quick attack to dodge Marth’s next attack. Pikachu now behind Marth turn and was about to strike at Marth but he also turns around and was about to strike too.
Then all of a sudden everything around the field goes dim and Marth and Pikachu were thrown across the stage by an unknown force which pretty much caused a tie but that wasn’t important to the brawlers. Ike, Jigglypuff, Mewtwo and Pichu quickly went to help get Marth and Pikachu back to normal.
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The other brawlers gazed at the stage which a strange hole appeared above it. What came out were Primids but they looked different, instead of purple, red, or metal like they were slightly bigger and were dark blackish red color then the purple ones. Fox and Falco jumps down first followed by the others Olimar and Luigi were about to run away but captain falcon grabbed them and threw them to battle. Mewtwo, Jigglypuff, and revived them when there in their Trophy stand form. Pikachu and Marth look at the wild fight going on against the Primids. The reacted quickly and joined the battle.
Yoshi egg rolled at the Primids and made them fly in the air and Meta knight followed and used drill rush slicing through the Primids while there airborne. Red throws out Charizard and burnt smashed and ripped apart most of the Primids.
Zelda, Ness and Lucas fuses there projectile attacks and throws the combo at the Primids with so much force it flew them off to space before they ever evaporated. Pit soon enough came in and helped fight them.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Just when the battle was finally over all of a sudden what came out of the portal wasn’t a Primids no more but now creatures called Heartless. Mario and Pit were about to call off a retreat because the team was getting weary of battle but then all of a sudden a 2 warriors came out of the portal and slashed the heartless to pieces one weapon was a big wrench and the other was a sword-like key.
“Who are you and what is going on here!” Pit yelled out in frustration. The two strangers pulled down their hoods one look like a cat but all greasy and another was a young boy “I am Ratchet and my partner here is Sora” the cat like person said. “Our dimension is being attacked by a being known as Debuu and we need have no choice but to ask of your help” Sora says.
[glow=red,2,300] TOO BE CONTINUED.....[/glow]
Also, try to pace things a little more; it feels like a wadded up paper of ideas being thrust at my face. Take the time to fold it into a neat little airplane. Metaphorically speaking. 
