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Post by smashbro on Jun 2, 2008 20:35:38 GMT -5
it was originally the building where Samus and Pikachu were in the emmissary...but that was before i finished it, so i didnt know that it was destroyed. so it doesnt really matter much where. just a large building
i added another chapter, will get at least 1 more up before i take a break for finals. get ready for a lot of people saved in each chapter coming up
im working on the next chapter, just to let you know. I'm going to have a few people go and save others, while the ones in the library talk. Hopefully it can develop problems more for the next story and show more of the characters personality. a couple conversations in the next chapter are pretty long, and very important. looks like it could be over two pages.
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Post by smashbro on Jun 9, 2008 19:41:52 GMT -5
added chapter 57, im almost done. hopefully im starting up a few more conflicts that will be important in the next story, don't expect all the answers by 61.
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Post by bobsnicket on Jun 9, 2008 20:30:05 GMT -5
At last the tide is turning...
Was the I the beginning of another sentence you never finished? ;D
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Post by smashbro on Jun 9, 2008 20:46:06 GMT -5
At last the tide is turning... Was the I the beginning of another sentence you never finished? ;D sorry, fixing it now  ~~~~~~ also, i was just looking back on the beginning of my story, and i noticed that most of the "chapters" are a mere one or two paragrapghs, compared to the 2 pages (in word) i write now. it seems like those chapters were way too short. and yeah, i know what you mean by not taking as long for everyone to meet up |
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Post by bobsnicket on Jun 9, 2008 20:54:28 GMT -5
My first chapter was 3 pages on Word...chapter 12 was 40 pages...
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Post by smashbro on Jun 9, 2008 20:55:29 GMT -5
HOLY...!!! you must really like writing. grated, i have plans for working on 3 fanfics this summer, but thats a lot of pages for a chapter
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Post by bobsnicket on Jun 9, 2008 20:59:36 GMT -5
Yes, well, I do really like writing, but in all fairness I was using 13.5 font for some odd formatting reason I can't remember...now they average from 20-25 pages/chapter, but are broken into sections and very detailed.
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Post by smashbro on Jun 11, 2008 17:18:51 GMT -5
added another chapter
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Bert
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Post by Bert on Jun 11, 2008 17:24:57 GMT -5
I gotta say Smashbro, this story is coming out really nicely.
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Post by smashbro on Jun 12, 2008 14:24:28 GMT -5
thanks! i think it's improved a lot overally, so now im decent. any one thing you like in particular that you'd like me to do or add more of?
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Post by Bert on Jun 12, 2008 14:32:23 GMT -5
Well...
More Meta Knight scenes? >.<
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Post by smashbro on Jun 13, 2008 15:11:48 GMT -5
added another chapter, the longest one so far. it basically sets up for next story, and saves a few people
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Post by Bert on Jun 13, 2008 16:07:11 GMT -5
I'm on the edge of my seat now... epic story is EPIC!
"Where'd you learn those words?"
"Snake".
I laughed so hard at that.
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Post by smashbro on Jun 14, 2008 17:12:45 GMT -5
yeah...sorry about the swearing, if it offends anyone.
And I have a lot planned to write about in the final two chapters of this one, it'll hopeully get more epic.
also, if you haven;t already, vote in the poll under comments
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smashbro ~~~ Authority: 20 ~~~ Combat: 10
