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lordike
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my hearts all cut up. why doesn't it hurt

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The hunt begins Sept 24, 2008 17:05:17 GMT -5

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Post by lordike on Sept 24, 2008 17:05:17 GMT -5

Chapter 1

Time To Take Out Link

Ike meet up with snake and go and take out the hyrule hero's. they have proved a pest in our efforts to capture Hyrule. Snake Radios in" Ike I am already there i am in the warehouse." Got it snake" radio communication ends. Snake I have made it into the warehouse. I saw before i made it in link he was by the master sword's temple.

Got it Ike. I m going in. I willthrow a gas grenade so you know where i am. (smoke grenade thrown by lvl 2 staircase. I am getting ready to move. "snake wait." I will take out the knights you take out the more Heavily armed soldiers. MOVE!!!!! (ike and snake attack and wipe out warehouse). ok.

The attack is working. call the boss. ok ike(radios Sepiroth) what are the ordes boss. YOur orders are to steal the master sword. ok sir. (radio communication end) ok lets go.( sees a fight happaning in the temple. Whats happening. Ganon is attacking ike. lets go help him.

THe fight begins. Ike uses eather ganon usis ganon punch and snake shoots a rocket. at that second youg & toon link jump in to help Link. They are peats. The links all use trifoce slash.Ganon barely dodges and kills young link. Ike goes and heals snake and toon link and link get away with the master sword and with Zelda.

Last Edit: Sept 24, 2008 17:26:09 GMT -5 by lordike

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¡Yiff Police! Member [M:200] Yiffing is a criminal offensive in this part of town. Posts: 7,800	The hunt begins Sept 28, 2008 11:32:50 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ¡Yiff Police! on Sept 28, 2008 11:32:50 GMT -5 Im not trying to be rude or anything, but this fanfic is filled with horrendous mistakes that make the story unreadable.

Bert Member Life's a gas, oh yea~ah! Posts: 2,235	The hunt begins Sept 28, 2008 11:36:11 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Bert on Sept 28, 2008 11:36:11 GMT -5 O HAI TWILIGHTLINK! Yeah... I can't tell who's talking, or what's happening...
	fEELO: back in my day, [CENSORED] you.

¡Yiff Police! Member [M:200] Yiffing is a criminal offensive in this part of town. Posts: 7,800	The hunt begins Sept 28, 2008 11:37:45 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ¡Yiff Police! on Sept 28, 2008 11:37:45 GMT -5 LOL hey lo Bert??? But yes we not trying to mean, we are just trying to help make this fanfic better!!

Bert Member Life's a gas, oh yea~ah! Posts: 2,235	The hunt begins Sept 28, 2008 11:45:07 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Bert on Sept 28, 2008 11:45:07 GMT -5 It also looks like it was written as it went along... which isn't that good of an idea.
	fEELO: back in my day, [CENSORED] you.

TotemSP/Esspytood: So, I should echo my query on the sites as dead as the steam group, do any of you talk to anyone else here?

Did you find (or found... again) a new place of community?

Or not? Where are you guys? Jan 17, 2017 3:38:48 GMT -5

Jukan: I still visit this site every now and then believe it or not. But I am a nobody and nobody cares about nobodies like me anyway. I'm sure you want the more interesting people like SLE and Angel. Jan 22, 2017 15:24:06 GMT -5

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